Sarah Ann Hall

Reporting on writing in progress or, more probably, not; practising flash fiction.

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OLWG #60&61 – micropoetry – #amwriting

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I struggled during July to keep up with my writing commitments, and my responses to the New Unofficial On-Line Writer’s Guild prompts have been slow in coming. There is a way of combining the last two sets of prompts into a story, but I’m not up to the challenge, and have opted for ease and brevity with micropoetry. As I write that, I realised I am not prepared to reveal the number of agonised minutes spent to come up with these.

Thank you to Thom for putting up with my tardiness.

 

 

Broken

When delivered.

Phone customer services.

‘You’re call is important to us.’

Liar.

 

‘Switch off

And on again.’

‘I’ve done that already.’

‘Jiggle it a little bit more.’

Useless.

 

 

Well damn.

He didn’t know

She loved him all that much.

They both enjoyed their week away.

Surprised.

 

 

Fast for health reasons.

Made weak by summer’s wild heat

Hunger pangs abound.

I just want something to eat.

Reconsider decision.

 

 

Getting old,

Losing his senses.

‘Speak up, boy

Shout louder.

It’s important what you say.’

Learn from each other.

 

 

You are never going to believe this. I won last night’s lottery.

 


 

This week’s prompts are:

  1. you are never going to believe this
  2. well damn
  3. jiggle it a little bit

 

Last week’s prompts were:

  1. I just want something to eat
  2. Speak up, boy
  3. your call is important to us

 

Go ahead and dive in, set your imagination free!
Write something
Ready, Set, Go – you have 25 minutes, but if that is not possible, take as long as you need.

Have fun

 

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Written by Sarah Ann

August 2, 2018 at 6:10 pm

OLWG#55 -#micropoetry #amwriting

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I have returned to micropoetry this week for my response to the New Unofficial On-Line Writer’s Guild because these prompts seemed to lend themselves that way, or it might be because cancelled appointments have been reinstated and I wondered if I’d have time to develop anything longer. So here are a shadorma, American Cinquain and tanka.

Thank you to TNKerr as ever for this week’s prompts.

 

Limpid pools:

Sunlight reflecting;

Inviting;

Refreshing.

Watch out for the undertow!

Danger lurks beneath.

 

Notice.

Look at these scars.

Open your eyes and ears.

Self-harm dulls the pain others cause.

Hear me.

 

when the boys arrive

the party will get started

alcohol will flow

they’ll dance and jive till cock crow

unless their brothers drive by

 


 

This week’s prompts are:

  1. limpid pools
  2. look at these scars
  3. when the boys arrive

 

Go ahead and dive in, set your imagination free!
Write something
Ready, Set, Go – you have 25 minutes, but if that is not possible, take as long as you need.

Have fun

Written by Sarah Ann

June 20, 2018 at 4:13 pm

OLWG#52 – micropoetry

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I am behind with my responses to the New Unofficial On-Line Writer’s Guild Prompts and so have returned to micropoetry in an attempt to get on top of my disorganisation.

Thanks and congratulations to TNKerr on posting these prompts for a whole year.

 

tanka

kids line up in rows

sit at desks in the classroom

what’s one more or less

when measles contagion hits

or a gunman visits school

 

 

American sentence

Love me. For me. Forever. Everything else is complicated.

 

 

Shadorma

Birthday cake,

Sandwiches and crisps.

Finger food

Nibbled at.

We say goodbye in circles,

Hugs until next time.

 


This week’s prompts are:

  1. what’s one more or less
  2. everything else is complicated
  3. we say goodbye in circles

 

Go ahead and dive in, set your imagination free!
Write something
Ready, Set, Go – you have 25 minutes, but if that is not possible, take as long as you need.

Have fun

 

Written by Sarah Ann

June 3, 2018 at 2:40 pm

OLWG#46 – At the Theatre – #micropoetry

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It is occasionally worrying what a couple of days away from something can do to one’s perspective on one’s writing. The prompts for the #46 On-Line Writer’s Guild prompts had me excitedly starting a story about society rushing about, the loss of conversation, and advent of driverless cars. However, when I went to finish it, I realised what a load of drivel it was. So I looked at the prompts again and went to the theatre instead, producing a haiku, shadorma and American cinquain.

 

 

rehearsals again

don’t be late, don’t slam that door

orders from all sides

 

 

What a rush!

Touching up faces

Scene changes

Costume swaps

Hitting the spot every time.

The show must go on.

 

 

Waiting

With bated breathe

Standing on the corner

For the smiling stars to appear

Stage door

 


This week’s prompts are:

  1. what a rush
  2. on the corner
  3. don’t slam that door

 

Go ahead and dive in, set your imagination free!
Write something
Ready, Set, Go – you have 25 minutes, but if that is not possible, take as long as you need.

Have fun

Written by Sarah Ann

April 23, 2018 at 11:15 am

OLWG#41 – #micropoetry – shadorma

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I decided to try some shadorma in an attempt to address the OLWG #41 prompts in good time. Two came quickly and relatively easy to mind, but one was reluctant to play ball. I’m not sure the last of these says anything at all, but the first one is a bit of fun.

Thanks to TNKerr for posting and hosting every week.

 

 

She likes jokes,

playing tricks, teasing.

‘Pull my thumb,’

she hisses.

Her prosthetic arm flies off.

She crumples, giggling

 

Movie trip:

Classic film weekend.

Family

Adventure.

‘Have we seen this already?’

‘Many times, grandma.’

 

Good morning.

Howdy. How are you?

Aloha.

G’day mate.

It’s just a figure of speech.

Nowt to fret over.

 

Written by Sarah Ann

March 19, 2018 at 1:05 pm

OLWG#26 – Micropoetry – #amwriting

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This week’s New Unofficial On’Line Writer’s Guild prompts leant themselves to being an American sentence all by themselves. Very lazily and only slightly adapted, here are 17-sylables:

‘You can learn a lot from books,’ the gypsy woman said. ‘Mine’s out March 1st.’

I need to spend longer than 25-minutes coming up with a response to these, and to stop using the prompts as titles. However, taking each prompt in turn I’ve stuck with poetry this week: a haiku, a cinquain (although having read the original post on these, I’m not sure the stresses are right at all), and a shadorma. Having broken away from the grip of NaNoWriMo, I decided to have a bit of fun.

 

You can learn a lot from books

eccentricity

more read about than achieved

he practised daily

 

The gypsy woman said

Happy,

I see you are.

May it last forever.

On the other hand it may not.

Useless.

 

It won’t be available until April 1st

*Her new book:

glossy front cover,

overpriced,

badly writ.

April fools’ day a good day

to launch such drivel.

 

* ‘The’ did not fit here, feel free to replace ‘her’ with ‘his’.

Written by Sarah Ann

November 30, 2017 at 6:52 pm

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