Sarah Ann Hall

Reporting on writing in progress or, more probably, not; practising flash fiction.

God Knows – #gargleblaster156

with 38 comments


‘It wasn’t me.’

‘It never is.’

‘Promise, Mum. It wasn’t me. It was Sally.’

‘She wasn’t here.’

‘Maybe Dad knocked it over. Or the cat?’

‘God knows. It isn’t really that important.’



‘Does God really know who broke your mug?’






This is my submission for this week’s gargleblaster challenge over at yeah write. This week’s Ultimate Question to answer in 42 words: Who dunnit?







Written by Sarah Ann

April 7, 2014 at 8:57 pm

38 Responses

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  1. Too cute!


    April 7, 2014 at 9:15 pm

  2. I like the childlike innocence conveyed in this piece.


    April 7, 2014 at 10:39 pm

  3. So cute!


    April 7, 2014 at 10:41 pm

  4. Sure does 🙂 This is cute! Owning up to something is never easy. (I remember the lure of ‘we won’t be upset if you tell us the truth.’ That was a lie 🙂 )


    April 7, 2014 at 11:48 pm

    • I think my parents used to use that line too, but it wasn’t a lie, just an exaggeration. 😉

      Sarah Ann

      April 9, 2014 at 9:24 pm

  5. I can hear the tone of voice… very nicely put.


    April 7, 2014 at 11:52 pm

  6. Love that last line!

  7. Aw, this is cute and funny. 🙂

    AZ Gringa

    April 8, 2014 at 1:04 am

  8. Funny ending 🙂


    April 8, 2014 at 1:41 am

  9. You mean He knows – like, He really really knows! Oops!

    Eric Alagan

    April 8, 2014 at 5:24 am

  10. Great. Makes me really wonder 🙂


    April 8, 2014 at 6:31 am

  11. Ha!ha!Loved the dialogues and that last line was a killer! 😉


    April 8, 2014 at 7:04 am

  12. *snort* does god know indeed! Lol, very cute.

    Natalie DeYoung

    April 8, 2014 at 8:11 pm

  13. Probably the easiest way to get a child to tell on themselves. This was cute.

    M. L. Sexton

    April 8, 2014 at 11:04 pm

  14. Ha! That’ll make a kid think, even if he doesn’t own up. 🙂 Fun little dialog! Thanks for joining the gargleblaster!


    April 9, 2014 at 4:53 am

  15. Aw…That is lovely and the Mama’s resigned tone is just right. Great job!


    April 9, 2014 at 9:03 am

    • Very happy to know that the resigned tone came across. Thank you.

      Sarah Ann

      April 9, 2014 at 9:12 pm

  16. I like this.


    April 9, 2014 at 12:17 pm

  17. Great job! Reminds me of when mine were little.


    April 9, 2014 at 5:28 pm

  18. Great dialogue! Fun and clever answer to the prompt. 🙂


    April 9, 2014 at 6:26 pm

  19. Awwwww. Cutie pie.


    April 9, 2014 at 8:12 pm

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