Sarah Ann Hall

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#Trifextra: Week 59 – The Mist

with 19 comments

This weekend Trifecta are asking for exactly 33 words inspired by the following photo.

After reading many of the good and serious entries of others, mine’s a bit weak, but it’s the first (and only) thing that came to mind. It doesn’t do credit to this gorgeous photo.

 

 

How could I be so stupid? To drop that most precious thing? How am I going to find it with all these kids running about and –

‘Sorry, sir. Didn’t see you down there.’

 

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Written by Sarah Ann

March 16, 2013 at 9:17 pm

19 Responses

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  1. I love this. Very real to life.

    deanabo

    March 16, 2013 at 9:24 pm

  2. And you accomplished a different take on the prompt! Well done, nothing weak about this.

    • Thank you for your supportive comments – they are much appreciated.

      Sarah Ann

      March 18, 2013 at 2:14 pm

  3. 🙂 this is a great “other” look 🙂

    barbara

    March 16, 2013 at 10:22 pm

  4. Ha!ha!Loved the lighter take on this prompt after lots of heavy stuff & a few cool dark ones,Sarah -the tone of surprise at finding someone instead of something was very funny!:-)

    atrm61

    March 16, 2013 at 10:34 pm

  5. This is such a creative take on the prompt – not weak at all, just different, which is good! Well done!

    Suzanne

    March 16, 2013 at 11:18 pm

    • Thank you. I’m glad you found it creative and am feeling better about it for your comment.

      Sarah Ann

      March 18, 2013 at 2:13 pm

  6. lol Very funny.

    concrit: ‘that most precious thing’ really should be a specific object. My ugly engagement ring. : )

    kymminbarcelona

    March 17, 2013 at 12:36 am

    • Thanks and I agree. I could only think ring or letter and thought they were a bit too obvious. The ring would work as something small (likely to be dropped) and hard (bounce out of sight). Will try harder to be specific and not chicken out next time.

      Sarah Ann Hall

      March 18, 2013 at 2:08 pm

  7. Hmm. This makes my mind wander and dwell, as great fiction should. Thanks for your absolutely-not-weak entry!
    –JW

    jumbledwriter

    March 17, 2013 at 8:45 am

    • Thank you for your comments. Now where did your mind go wandering?

      Sarah Ann

      March 18, 2013 at 4:20 pm

  8. lol awww, it’s a great entry! (:

    Draug419

    March 17, 2013 at 3:14 pm

  9. Fun different approach. Great job.

    Gretchen Fogelstrom

    March 17, 2013 at 4:12 pm


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